i designed all this i am the mean median and mode
sometimes i kill all right handed people on the far right
avarage = ava RAGE
garage = ga RAGE
storage = Store RAGE
i a father of fathers Elohim am the mean the ava-Rage
love and rage is just up and down and we are super balls
I discovered your poetry this morning. This piece speaks to me through the juice of paradox which I adore. Very well done. Thank you for reading my work and through that means, I have discovered yours.
Blessings 🙂
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i designed all this i am the mean median and mode
sometimes i kill all right handed people on the far right
avarage = ava RAGE
garage = ga RAGE
storage = Store RAGE
i a father of fathers Elohim am the mean the ava-Rage
love and rage is just up and down and we are super balls
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Wow, excellent piece
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Exactly right!!
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Beautifully written, dear Vigil.
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Love to Breath! Beautiful and well expressed a lovely piece. Thank for sharing it.
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Beautiful piece
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poignant 🙂
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Yes, very very true – and the greatest tragedy is indeed when we ‘forget to breathe…’ Thank you.
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Nice post.
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Sad.
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Great poem….so true!
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I read this in my email and I thought “what a piece!”
This was a splendid write, Vigil!
Did you mean “slay to love” or “love to slay”?
Congratulations on the nomination for Liebster award. Here’s the link:
http://realityenchanted.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/liebster-blog-award-nomination/
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I discovered your poetry this morning. This piece speaks to me through the juice of paradox which I adore. Very well done. Thank you for reading my work and through that means, I have discovered yours.
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thanks Vigil 🙂
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So, is the kitten in the image about to eat the chick…? As for the poem, defiant and provocative! Liked it!
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Reblogged this on VigilKumar.
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This is such a great piece your contrast makes me “forget to breathe” until the end.
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Poignant.
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