All this ferocity is caused by our velocity,
We live with false intensity, a life of feathered density,
Arrive for the departure of the legendary archer –
A drowning generation in an ocean of sensation.
Thank you for liking my Rain Story and Bereft, and supporting my writing. I am honored you would take the time with one who hasn’t written as much poetry as you. I am enjoying your work. I kike your confidence with the language. Cheerleading your continued success. Diana
All this ferocity is caused by our velocity,
We live with false intensity, a life of feathered density,
Arrive for the departure of the legendary archer –
A drowning generation in an ocean of sensation.
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Poetic comment… Thanks
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Wow~
Nice.
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Thanks
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Very very nice – such a large poem, straddles so much space.
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I have traveled the Milky Way of my mind.
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Very interesting, loving the photo, so beautiful!
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nice composition.. 🙂
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That’s one great poem, Vigil. You have done a great job! Thank you for sharing, many blessings and much love to you. 🙂
Subhan Zein
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yes, very very nice !
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both image and words equally beautiful, poetry times 2…
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“psyche is a satellite with no orbit..”…my fav line. 🙂
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the velocity of illusion? easy…
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Very nice
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Outstanding poem.Thank you for visiting my side.Wishing you a wonderful day.Jalal
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A master piece! Typical of the mind! Lovely words; well crafted and put together. Beautifully done! 🙂
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Enjoyed this rocketing poem very much; thank you for subscribing 🙂
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Reblogged this on VigilKumar.
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Enjoyed as much the second time around as the first. I think that’s one of the tests of a good poem. Bravo, Virgil. Poem on …
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Thank you for liking my Rain Story and Bereft, and supporting my writing. I am honored you would take the time with one who hasn’t written as much poetry as you. I am enjoying your work. I kike your confidence with the language. Cheerleading your continued success. Diana
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Nice composition. I like your words..”Till the cycle of life blows out”
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