Yes, it is – as poetry it works amazingly well, once you get used to the grammatical quirks More importantly, your language is extremely evocative. True poetry leaves an opening for interpretation, and yours does that.
I love your poetry and would very much like to share mine with you. I have a blog here http://melissafrybeasley.wordpress.com/ I’m not as good as you … but you may enjoy reading a different style. I write on many topics. Was wondering if you ever submit your poetry to magazines and journals, online and print? Melissa
my neurons
are still mesmerized
and buzzing
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Love the play on words.
Hehehe!!! Fascinating wordplays.
And the cynical theme, to taste!
I love the image blending with your wonderful words….so very awesome my brother! God bless!
Cheering words… thank you so much!
Thanks you for visitng my blog and liking poem “Lord Shiva’. Your poem ‘Hypocracy’ really is very nice.
Thank you sir, pleased by your words.
Sheer genius.
Really? thank you.
Yes, it is – as poetry it works amazingly well, once you get used to the grammatical quirks
More importantly, your language is extremely evocative. True poetry leaves an opening for interpretation, and yours does that.
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Profound indeed!
“Silicon chips of novel thoughts” Ooooh, what an awesome phrase. The Geek in me approves!
great lines and so aptly said!
I love your poetry and would very much like to share mine with you. I have a blog here http://melissafrybeasley.wordpress.com/ I’m not as good as you … but you may enjoy reading a different style. I write on many topics. Was wondering if you ever submit your poetry to magazines and journals, online and print? Melissa
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Thanks for the follow! Love your posts!
love this one
“…Until lumbering life of hypocrisy ends ”
Beautifully said, Vigil.
Sweet photograph, Vigil. Profound poem.