Charisma of your visage
I’m an imperfect sage
Miles apart you seat
I hear your heart beat
It reverberates whole
In my throbbing soul
Scorching ember of noon
Gyrates nippy night of moon
Ethical in steamy belief
Escorts to gloomy grief
Shadow shatters attitude
Saddens no way fortitude
Passage of life is comic
Message of love is cosmic
-VIGIL KUMAR
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I love the last two lines! You’re such a gem, great stuff, Vigil! Keep them coming
“Passage of life is comic
Message of love is cosmic”
Wonderful lines!
Love this, the last two lines are the perfect ending, just amazing!!
Beautiful words, Vigil.
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Your blog is amazing!
WOW! Thanks for visiting my blog. Your images and words are inspiring and humbling.
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is the most charismatic one read over here! the scene ,the pic, and the perfect words of envisage create the atmosphere painted in the lines.
I have nominated you for the “Blog Of The Year 2012” award.
http://rhubblog.com/2012/12/14/blog-of-the-year-2012-award-6-stars-actually-it-is-7-but-only-6-are-allowed/
Congratulations,
Ronnie.
Beauty-full!
Very poetic and charasmatic!!!
Must agree with the other…the last line is quite poignant.
…is cosmic indeed!
Remarkably beautiful, Vigil!
Thank you!
“Message of love is cosmic”
A great line that says it all.
On very nippy nights, the moon does indeed gyrate!!!