“Angels2end” has expressed my feeling also about your poem – a style which is unfamiliar but amazingly powerful! and the image is wonderful! My praise to you!
wonderful sentence with many museum like moments in which i stopped and took in a certain word. like “betoken.” what a grand old word and you used it so well.
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i like the poem. you have a good sense in words, but why did you make the punctuation like that, is it a style?
Strong imagery
Vigil, your first stanza threw me with words like lambs, slaughter, and abattoir, but as I read on I got it. Thanks for the challenging read
“Angels2end” has expressed my feeling also about your poem – a style which is unfamiliar but amazingly powerful! and the image is wonderful! My praise to you!
wonderful sentence with many museum like moments in which i stopped and took in a certain word. like “betoken.” what a grand old word and you used it so well.
Thanks a lot for your appreciation.