First of all I would like to say excellent blog! I had a quick question in which I’d like to ask if you do not mind. I was interested to know how you center yourself and clear your thoughts prior to writing. I’ve had trouble clearing my mind in getting my ideas out.
I do enjoy writing however it just seems like the first 10 to 15 minutes tend to
be wasted just trying to figure out how to begin. Any suggestions or tips?
The brutal truth…each color, each man is corrupted in one way or the other…
“blue prints of white lies..” the paper pen lies which encloud the sun of developement….
So true, dont know where we are being led…
your poem makes me think of how even the precious, free things like “color” are corrupted by those who corrupt. and they don´t care. color is just another thing to own… but not for the true poet and that should be a manifesto. wonderful poem.
A very powerful poem …paradoxical given the apparent impotence that corruption wields on the docile public. I was drawn by the title given that I’d written “The colour of a Lie”. Thank you for visiting creativeintrospection.
First of all I would like to say excellent blog! I had a quick question in which I’d like to ask if you do not mind. I was interested to know how you center yourself and clear your thoughts prior to writing. I’ve had trouble clearing my mind in getting my ideas out.
I do enjoy writing however it just seems like the first 10 to 15 minutes tend to
be wasted just trying to figure out how to begin. Any suggestions or tips?
Thanks!
Oh, yes, wish it wasn’t true that power is so easily currupted and that powerlessness is so pervading …
A statement of truth well poemed.
Impressively powerful!
A very strong poem.Like it
Very powerful depiction of corruption. Amazing for depicting it in colour.
Hi Vigilkumar. Thank you for liking my poem ‘Remembrance’. The Foureyed Poet.
I love the smell of corruption in the morning!
Great poem. Very powerful.
Thank you for liking my poem ‘The President A Nation’. The Foureyed Poet.
The brutal truth…each color, each man is corrupted in one way or the other…
“blue prints of white lies..” the paper pen lies which encloud the sun of developement….
So true, dont know where we are being led…
Vigil Kumar, I like this poem very much, both its substance and format.
Maria Tatham
Lovely! This is a powerful and evocative piece. I enjoyed it very much.
Very splendid piece of writing.Thank you
your poem makes me think of how even the precious, free things like “color” are corrupted by those who corrupt. and they don´t care. color is just another thing to own… but not for the true poet and that should be a manifesto. wonderful poem.
Very nice though very high standard for me.
The megabanks and megacorps have more power than most sovereign nations. Oooops. What sovereign nations ?
I like what you’re saying here and the way you say it !
wash the colors and re paint, its after all colors
Reblogged this on vigilkumar.
A very powerful poem …paradoxical given the apparent impotence that corruption wields on the docile public. I was drawn by the title given that I’d written “The colour of a Lie”. Thank you for visiting creativeintrospection.
Hi Vigilkumar. Clever it’s good. Thank You for liking my poem. Agent On The Tube. Best Wishes. The Foureyed Poet.
hi. thanks for dropping by SPENCE SENSE I lived in the Philippines for three years so I know whereof you speak. regards, raymond
Very clever, and unfortunately very true! k.
This is creative excellence. Well done,
Once again, I love the vibrant, organic use of words and images!
Colors of Corruption.. just awesome. : )
well done. : )
i couldnt have commented better than Prashant…excellent how you incorporated colors into the hues to be found in the dark world.
Hello there! Nice poem, I like it! I’d like to invite you to my blog: stenila.wordpress.com
God bless you and have a nice day!
The gruesome colors of corruption so remarkably portrayed with the genuine feel and helplessness intact.
Thank you for your precise observation.