The way you use the english language is like listening to the sound of a zipper being unzipped. And the image of the teeth of the zipper unfolding, is the form you are sculpting on canvas, which utters powerful wit and truth and secrets. It is apparent there is something inside you that has been wearing a sweater hoodie. And it hangs compact in the closet with other worn out hand me downs.
God-men. I think they are a huge part of our predicament. We spend too much time with them. I spent a good part of my life doing things I shouldn’t, validating myself with the actions of these “god-men”.
Time for some more discretion. Time to actually think from a priority standpoint.
The way you use the english language is like listening to the sound of a zipper being unzipped. And the image of the teeth of the zipper unfolding, is the form you are sculpting on canvas, which utters powerful wit and truth and secrets. It is apparent there is something inside you that has been wearing a sweater hoodie. And it hangs compact in the closet with other worn out hand me downs.
Beautiful.
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Welcome with pleasure…. thanks
I sure like your idea that we “rent” this “world” for our existence. A richly suggestive concept!
Thank you so much, Vigil, for liking and following my poetry blog. Cheers!
Beautiful and so thought provoking. Thanks for stopping by my blog and liking it. Can’t wait to read more of your work. Regards, Sandra
God-men. I think they are a huge part of our predicament. We spend too much time with them. I spent a good part of my life doing things I shouldn’t, validating myself with the actions of these “god-men”.
Time for some more discretion. Time to actually think from a priority standpoint.
Wow. This is excellently written. Good shot!
I really enjoyed reading this one. Thanks again!
Each line is a nugget of wisdom.
Well-conceived illuminations.
The truth of life is in change…but it never meant loosing upon your sense n values…sorry state it is..