Golden rays dip bed-ridden Orb
From night-long slumber
Crimson Sun infuses the horizon
Pervades milky white billows
East to West he treks a lot
Dawn to Dusk he toils a lot
Twelve noon burns his body
Delve his beloved darling
Very last she disembarks -
The lovely Moon, in full bloom,
But fervent lover – Our Sun,
Plunges into the ocean of Death
Twilight to first-light she moans
Melts like a cake- snow
Morn comes with the rebirth of Sun
And tragic romance prolongs…
-V. Vigil Kumar
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(Re-birth of the sun) >>>> beautiful … the poem and the blog
thank you for sharing …….. and for stopping by my silly blog … thank you
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a great rendering of a mythology as old as time, archaic and fresh, archetypes and afternoon tv. wonderful, i love it!
Lovely imagery. Have you been to http://dversepoets.wordpress.com/ We’re a very active poetry community and would love to see you there. A great chance to share your work and read others.
Hi there, Thanks for your wonderful poetry. Keep them coming. Thanks for visiting the blog.
Thank you for your finest words and enthusiasm.
This is the kind of poetry that absolutely must be read aloud – I love the use of alliteration and the sparing repetition of vowel sounds – it boosts the sense of something cyclic, seasonal and at the same time playful…
Hi. Thank you for following my blog! I really appreciate it. Your poetry is beautiful, you have such a way with words. Please keep writing!
Thank you for stopping by and following my blog. You write wonderful poetry.
Beautiful words with powerful imagery. I love this.
Thanks a lot.
Hi Vigilkumar
You write good poetry up here, so please keep penning and keep inspiring!
I would like to thank you for following my blog. I hope my blog doesn’t disappoint you and that your visits in my blog have been and will always be a joyful ride.
Thank you again and I wish you a lovely day!
Subhan Zein
Thank you very much.
lov the final line.
Beautiful. Thanks for stopping by my blog. Regards, Sandra
Creates really lovely imagery :’) beautiful poem!
Thank you so much.
Thank you
Wonderful similes and metaphors