Though rough and tough,
This celestial ball
Looks like a marble;
Infiltrates the silver cloud
And so our body and soul,
Engulfs our thoughts…
Passionate in appearance
Prompt in performance
Scientific in approach;
Teaches the philosophy of nature
By waxing and waning:
‘Overcome all ups and downs’
- V. VIGIL KUMAR
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Some flow, others know, what it is that bestows. Love your insight!!!!!
moon ~ the muse ~ whispering through mind’s fog ~ stirring ~ passions
You write beautifully – very individual style, just lovely.
The poetry is rendered very beautifully. The essence is amazingly carried throughout. Keep up the good work.
Hi Vigil and greetings! Thank you for visiting my site and I look forward to getting to know you through your words! Best – Bill
Thank you for liking my poem ‘ The Elderly Man’. The Foureyed Poet.
Thank you for liking my poem ‘The Elderly Man’. The Foureyed Poet.
Love your words. And the photography is fantastic!!! Thanks so much too, for your ‘Likes’ on my blog. They are so appreciated.
Oooooh that’s a good one. Very haiku-feeling.
It’ll change NOW, dear ones. New World is coming up – if you choose.
LOVE
Your poem was a treat for all my senses. Thanks.
Many thanks for this poetic inspiration. Yes, this orb affects our bodies, minds, and emotions through its electro-magnetic influences and gravitational pull…also symbolic for the ups and downs of our personal lives in which we eventually gain mastery through awareness and remembrance of our connection to Spirit (Life/God). Delighted to read your posts. Shelley
Excellent way to express your thoughts.Thanks for visiting my site.Best regards.jalal
The two “verse” format is perfect, good contrast bewteen the two, I love the overall sense of the second.
it has so much food for thought. beautifully expressed
This is an example of my favorite type of poetry, simple yet thought provoking. Thanks for liking my latest poem ‘Arrogance,’ and for following Dirtywordlaundry. I’m enjoying treading your blog and I’ll be following you as well!
I’m delighted by your enchanting words.
what twists and turns and yet straighforward philosophy–beautifully written. Just the best poem!
Thank you for your nice appreciation.
Great words. Even I fancy the moon, would like you to read one of my post on the moon – http://lunacyoflife.wordpress.com/2012/07/20/ruminating-on-the-nature-of-the-moon/
Thanks alot for following my blog
“Infiltrates” it seems it does have that power sometimes
Hi vigilkumar, Thank you for liking my poem ‘The Disc’ Anything is possible if we open our minds to the impossible. Take Care. Malctg
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Thank you for following my blog, and your blog so nice
Thank you for following my blog.
The inspiration provided by looking at the moon is one thing all people have in common. A connection between strangers.
The Moon, Sun and Nature are inspiration for innumerable verses. Thank you
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Thank you for reblogging and backing…
A fine poem
Thank you
Love these words: Passionate in appearance, Prompt in performance. Thank you so much for stopping by My Journal of Praise and liking posts.
Interesting. never thought of learning lessons from the moon.
Thanks a lot
Wow this is a beautiful blog! You’ve got a new follower
Thank you for reading one of my posts. I am so glad that you liked it!
Thank you so much. I’m also very glad.
I read this again and apprepriciate it more than before. Next time I feel low, I’ll channel my thoughts to the waxing and waning.
Thank you for your wise comment
I love where you take this piece… right home to the point.
Very grateful comment… nice
I love the two-stanza format and the alliterative qualities of your diction. Beautiful imagery.
Inspiring comment! Thank you for your admiration.
This is lovely and wise.
Welcome the positive reception & encouragement, Thank you
So true – life has its seasons, its successes and failures, its waxing and waning…
Thank you for your nice appreciation
Wow – you’re either up early or up late! Can’t sleep?